Kia Ora, I'm Grace a year 7 student from YMS which stands for Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like this because its interesting the way you chose to spend it out and show it, I haven't seen someone do this type of design in a long time but I think is great.
I also like this because it spends what you need to show.
To improve what you could do is maybe add it into a slide and explain about each thing individual so its more spread out and maybe talk about each thing.
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteI'm Grace a year 7 student from YMS which stands for Yaldhurst Model School.
I really like this because its interesting the way you chose to spend it out and show it, I haven't seen someone do this type of design in a long time but I think is great.
I also like this because it spends what you need to show.
To improve what you could do is maybe add it into a slide and explain about each thing individual so its more spread out and maybe talk about each thing.
Apart from that its great
Kind regards -
Grace