Hey Terapi My name is Chloe a year eight from Yaldhurst Model School. This blog its really good because I like how you have done a great diagram/brainstorm which is awesome. I really like how you have added some clear explaining in the diagram/brainstorm which is really great.
Next time you could add more sentences in the introduction so then people know what your doing this for? Or do some more explaining which would be a bit helpful. How long did it take you to do this amazing brainstorm/diagram?
I also thought a dinghy was just a boat. I never knew it was all of these things. Well done - Kind regards Chloe
Hey Terapi, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked your brainstorm because you have colour coded them which was pretty cool and smart. I like the fact that you have added what a Dinghy is and isn't and the fact that you wrote a sentence was also great.
This reminded me of when we were doing reading and I didn't know what this word was but this happened a long time ago but I found out what it was. I didn't know that a Dinghy is actually Donut because I know that it was like a boat or a floaty but I did not know it was a donut!
I think that you did an awesome job but maybe next time explain why you have done this and I know you have sort of written WHY but maybe go in a bit deeper with explaining it but otherwise, great job! Awesome work!
Hey Terapi
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chloe a year eight from Yaldhurst Model School.
This blog its really good because I like how you have done a great diagram/brainstorm which is awesome. I really like how you have added some clear explaining in the diagram/brainstorm which is really great.
Next time you could add more sentences in the introduction so then people know what your doing this for? Or do some more explaining which would be a bit helpful. How long did it take you to do this amazing brainstorm/diagram?
I also thought a dinghy was just a boat. I never knew it was all of these things. Well done
- Kind regards Chloe
Hey Terapi, my name is Parwin and I am a year 8 from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked your brainstorm because you have colour coded them which was pretty cool and smart. I like the fact that you have added what a Dinghy is and isn't and the fact that you wrote a sentence was also great.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me of when we were doing reading and I didn't know what this word was but this happened a long time ago but I found out what it was. I didn't know that a Dinghy is actually Donut because I know that it was like a boat or a floaty but I did not know it was a donut!
I think that you did an awesome job but maybe next time explain why you have done this and I know you have sort of written WHY but maybe go in a bit deeper with explaining it but otherwise, great job! Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Hi there Terapi, my name is Abby and I am a year 7 student at Yaldhurst Model School. I love the diagram that you made. It is very eye catching.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you made it a very clear but interesting blog post. It really makes your blog that much more interesting.
This reminds me of lots of other words I have learnt while I have been reading books and stories at school.
Next time you could write more about why you chose to post this so I will know why you chose to post it.
What other new words have you learnt this week?
Kind Regards,
Abby.