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Wednesday, 6 September 2017

Romeo and Juliet ballet



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  1. Kia ora, Api! What a lot of effort you have put into creating this writing. You have included so many details about our trip to the ballet. Well done! The ballet dancing and the costumes were amazing. We were so lucky to be able to go on this trip on the very comfortable bus.

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    1. Thank you Mrs Buchanan for that comment.

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