Facts about Nelly Trivia

Task Description: For this week my mum said to choose a famous celebrity and I learn about it. So I chooses Nelly Trivia cause I've seen some of his song and I really like it some of it. But the one song I really like was Dilemma with Kelly Rowland.

Explanation Writing

This week we are learning how to explain our writing.
When I explain my writing it feel  really fun to do, because
explain and you can say an example. For example, you can write
about even thing and you explain that writing.  

You may believe that you are responsible for what you do,
but not for what you think”. If you think your responsible then
you are a  role model, because you do lots of things that are
good and helpful. For example, if you clean your room without
your mum asking you to do it then you are responsible for
looking after your room and house.

Do think that dogs are the humans?. Pet’s, pet’s are fun
to play with but sometimes they can be a bit mad, because
things like pain are a trigger. Some dogs become fearful if their
food is taken away and may growl when someone reaches for
their food dish. Like for example, It's likely no surprise to dog
owners, but growing research suggests that man's best friend
often acts more human.

How to look after our land. First human can learn to pick up our
own rubbish. Because if we don’t pick up our rubbish then our
land will but pollution with lots of rubbish For an example “I was
eating my pie”. Near the beach and I finished eating my pie, but
then I drop my rubbish.

Do you think we should look after our pet? And should we litter
and kill the animals? What i think is that we should keep our pets
because god create them and they can be fun to play with,when
you are bored. But about the litter I think we should look after
things in the water because if we litter and it’s on the sea then
the fish eat it then it will be dead already 

So Remember Don’t Litter And look after your pets   

Thesis statement

WALT: Write a thesis.  Task Description: This week Room 1 has been learning a thesis statement. What we had to do was write the topic and then the answer and + it with because.

Dinghy

Task Description: Today my reading group learned a new word. That word was dinghy, the red was not right and the blue was right.

Chromebook commercial

Task Description: Last week me and friend have been working on doing a commercial. At Pt England school we use Chromebooks so we did a commercial about how to use a Chromebook. Using Chromebook is really good at helping with my work.

Facts About Octopus

Task Description: This week we learned about octopuses. Here is so facts about Octopuses. I did 8 facts about them. Octopuses are very cool to learn about.

Advertisements Persuasive

WALT: Recognise how advertisements use persuasion.
Task Description: This is my Advertisements Persuasive or Not? What is Persuasive?
well what me and Pilinilose did was,we watched some commercials and we had to write about it.  Also for our create task we have to try and make our own commercial about our school and things. 

School Hours Persuasive

Hook: Do you know what is persuasive writing?. We are learning how to persuasive people and kids. In my opinion I think that if kids go to school and learn they will have a good and amazing education.

Good Reason:  Learn more or Better education.

I think that if we go to school we will learn more and if we learn more
we will have more fun. One reason to go to school is if you don’t you will have every bad grades in school and have a good education.

Better Reason:  Better future for other kids.

In my opinion I think if we go to school a lot we have good education and a 
better future for lots of the kids in the world. Do you want your kid to learn more
and get a better future then take them to school.

Best Reason:  If we have more time at school we can play more. 

I believe when kids have more play time they will learn more and can have lots
of fun at the park and at class. Play time is a lot of fun for little kids to do if they
play they will learn and learn or just for like 5 minutes more play time. 

Conclusion:

Persuasive writing is a really good for your work. My Opinion is to just go to school
you will learn more and will have lots of fun and you will create lots of things. 

Task Description: This is my persuasive writing. I got 3 reason to write about it. It was OK to write about. Reason one was about to try and do more learning at home and at school and get a better education

that is one of the reason kid should go to school.

Watching a movie home

Have you watched small foot? cause I have. My brother, me, my auntie and two of my cousins came over to my house, on friday the 19 of July. We were watching nickelodeon and Spongebob. A movie was on then we saw the title it was small foot. Then we got ready to watch the movie.  My favorite part of the movie was the hole thing and  I loved all of the song and raps. I had a great time with my brother, cousin and auntie. Then my baby cousin came with my mum and dad and my
older cousin came to his name is Sam.

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