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Long long time ago there was a girl called Ayah and her older
sister that was so evil . Ayah is a 5 year old girl. She lives with her
mum and older sister. When she got older at the age of 10 year old
she had a best friend called Jane, they met at school. Ayah and Jane
loved to learn. Ayah didn’t like her sister because she was mean.
When Jane always come over Ayah is always happy to play with her.
sister that was so evil . Ayah is a 5 year old girl. She lives with her
mum and older sister. When she got older at the age of 10 year old
she had a best friend called Jane, they met at school. Ayah and Jane
loved to learn. Ayah didn’t like her sister because she was mean.
When Jane always come over Ayah is always happy to play with her.
One week later Jane came over to Ayah house they have to jump to go to the house. When the got in side Jane wants to play with Ana Ayah with some magic toy fairy she got that from her dad but he is dead now, then Ana came and step on the toy fairy. Then Ayah got mad,she hit the window, door and the walls she looked like a crazy like a dog. Then she ran away to the scary frost, but then Ayah was scared. Ana and Jane was looking for Ayah. Ayah was crying she saw a fairy, while the fairy was flying to the Ayah, Ayah set down next to the tree. The fairy said was are you doing Ayah said “my sister made me cry “. The fairy said let go back to your house and fix this. Ana was at home with Jane they were trying to call their mum. Then the fairy fix the problem. It was November the 22 it was Ayah birthday, for Ayah birthday Ana got Ayah a little puppy Ayah was so happy and they lived happily ever after.
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