Facts About Octopus

Task Description: This week we learned about octopuses. Here is so facts about Octopuses. I did 8 facts about them. Octopuses are very cool to learn about.

Advertisements Persuasive

WALT: Recognise how advertisements use persuasion.
Task Description: This is my Advertisements Persuasive or Not? What is Persuasive?
well what me and Pilinilose did was,we watched some commercials and we had to write about it.  Also for our create task we have to try and make our own commercial about our school and things. 

Happy Birthday Lao Lao

happy birthday Lao Lao I hope you had a cool and good birthday. You are the best lao lao you are my best friend. I love so much as a friend.

TRACKING MY-OUR LEARNING

Area

Task Description: Area is what we learned at school. Area and Perimeter is really fun and cool to learn area and perimeter. Area and perimeter is a very helpful for my maths and learning.

School Hours Persuasive

Hook: Do you know what is persuasive writing?. We are learning how to persuasive people and kids. In my opinion I think that if kids go to school and learn they will have a good and amazing education.

Good Reason:  Learn more or Better education.

I think that if we go to school we will learn more and if we learn more
we will have more fun. One reason to go to school is if you don’t you will have every bad grades in school and have a good education.

Better Reason:  Better future for other kids.

In my opinion I think if we go to school a lot we have good education and a 
better future for lots of the kids in the world. Do you want your kid to learn more
and get a better future then take them to school.

Best Reason:  If we have more time at school we can play more. 

I believe when kids have more play time they will learn more and can have lots
of fun at the park and at class. Play time is a lot of fun for little kids to do if they
play they will learn and learn or just for like 5 minutes more play time. 

Conclusion:

Persuasive writing is a really good for your work. My Opinion is to just go to school
you will learn more and will have lots of fun and you will create lots of things. 

Task Description: This is my persuasive writing. I got 3 reason to write about it. It was OK to write about. Reason one was about to try and do more learning at home and at school and get a better education

that is one of the reason kid should go to school.

Persuasion map

Task Description: Room 1 we did persuasion map. I was in the team against. More people need to learn and better future and better education.